Hi Fiona, I've had a quick look through the blog - it covers most of the important points - but I have a few suggestions that would improve it.
The Home page is perhaps the most important page of the whole blog - as it invites and encourages visitors to look further - so it needs to have good visual impact. At the moment you have very little on there. You could post a composite image - or project overview to give it the 'wow' factor.
What about internal product 'architecture' - how did you decide on layout and securing of circuit board and speakers ...? Did you do any research on speaker housing design...?
Colour schemes / aesthetics / materials choice / finish, could all have been given further consideration.
I would also do a final read through to check spellings as there are a number of typos.
Hi Fiona,
ReplyDeleteI've had a quick look through the blog - it covers most of the important points - but I have a few suggestions that would improve it.
The Home page is perhaps the most important page of the whole blog - as it invites and encourages visitors to look further - so it needs to have good visual impact. At the moment you have very little on there. You could post a composite image - or project overview to give it the 'wow' factor.
What about internal product 'architecture' - how did you decide on layout and securing of circuit board and speakers ...? Did you do any research on speaker housing design...?
Colour schemes / aesthetics / materials choice / finish, could all have been given further consideration.
I would also do a final read through to check spellings as there are a number of typos.